tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920072115824578790.post6938665464325422067..comments2012-12-05T11:26:23.702-06:00Comments on Stephanie Tisdale's EDM310 Class Blog: Blog Post #3Stephanie Tisdalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17782636589730795407noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920072115824578790.post-10576623543505893242012-09-20T22:01:42.606-05:002012-09-20T22:01:42.606-05:00Dr.Strange,
Thanks for catching my mistakes in my...Dr.Strange,<br /><br />Thanks for catching my mistakes in my post. I need to proofread my writing before posting. I'll take your advice into consideration as to going to the Writing Lab and purchasing the book you have mentioned.<br /><br />Thanks again.Stephanie Tisdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17782636589730795407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5920072115824578790.post-27413777089764764792012-09-20T09:59:20.525-05:002012-09-20T09:59:20.525-05:00"...in a hostile manor." A haunted house..."...in a hostile manor." A haunted house? I think you mean manner, not manor.<br /><br />"You’re evaluating a peer, therefore; evaluate them like you would want to be evaluated. Either move therefore to the second clause or eliminate it. It is not needed in my opinion.<br /><br />"...mistakes in your peers writing." peer's not peers<br /><br />"...three important steps when peer editing. This includes compliment, suggestions, and corrections." these, not this<br /><br />"Mrs. Cook begins by stating each child’s element whether he or she is vocal or no vocal or may have physical limitations." Element? What do you mean?<br /><br />"...given a iPad..." an not a<br /><br />"...with her students all by the use of..." Better: with her students by using...<br /><br />"...and any other type of source..." Better: and any other tool...<br /><br />"... if technology was in the classroom." When you have a conditional clause (if...) or a wish, you use were not was. This mistake is extremely common in the United States. It is still a mistake. <br /><br />You need to work on your writing. Consider going to the Writing Lab. Or buy a copy of Strunk and White <i>Elements of Style</i> and use it.<br />John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.com